What is a quality blog comment? Yep, you guessed right. It is a normal comment but it is like an improved version. Do you know how to do write one? If you do know, then post a quality comment to this blog. If you don't, then let me tell you how to write one.
By the way I am Albin from YMS. I am a Yr 8.
As you know a quality comment is a better version of the normal comment. So you start the comment by a really cool greeting like 'Malo e Lelei Marwah,' or 'Kia ora'. After that you need to introduce yourself. Once you have finished with your introduction it is time for you to start your awesome comment. After the introduction write a positive thing about the blog.
For example: if the blog has a dlo then you can write 'I liked your dlo'. After that write a thoughtful para. It means to make connection with you and the blogger.
For example: if the blogger has a cat then you can maybe write something like 'Oh yeah...I also have a cat at my house'.
Anyway I wanted to tell you about something else. Every tuesday we have a cybersmart lesson by Miss Morgan. Last week we started identifying what a quality comment is. We were divided into groups of three. Dion, Maddie and I were a group. (Here is link to Maddie and Dion's blogs.) We were given a few comments and were asked to make it better. Here is the slide.
Our best comment that we wrote was this one.
Do you think that this comment is really good?
Did you knew about quality comment before reading this blog?
What is going to be your favourite comment from the comment that we wrote?
That is it for today guys. Hope you guys learned something new form this blog.
Hey Albin, Its Renae, that girl in your class.
ReplyDeleteThis blog is cybersmarty!!!
I liked reading all your comments.
Which comment was your favourite to edit??
Did you like doing this cybersmart activity??
This blog is really good!!
Kind regards
-Renae